This is worse than being hit with an ugly stick (or even the whole forest).

I agree about the capitalization. In addition, as an (amateur) astronomer, I favor using "Terra" instead of "Earth," and likewise "Luna" and "Sol" f...

"Illuminated bullets" sounds like what i think of as "tracers."

To me, I see "future history" as a way of remembering the future will one day be history, I'm reminded of Martha's "Today is yesterday's tomorrow......